You’re broken glass, and I’ve got
Shards of you, stuck to my skin
They pierce me, with every breath I take
Making me bleed, until I’m covered in blood
But don’t they know, that I’m a masochist?
Who craves the pain, that comes from loving you?
I’ve got my lungs full of you
Making it hard to breathe
But I love the pain, the pain that comes from loving you
The pain kills me, but makes me feel alive
I’ve got shards of you, stuck to my skin
And I’m in no hurry, to take them out.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
I am speechless.
This comes from the depth of your heart.
I see you as one of the best poets I have ever read.
Though I feel you should be relieved of suffering.
May God bless you!
Love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
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Whatever I write is purely fiction, Anand. Unless I specify it isn’t. Thank you so much. 😀 That is such a great compliment. I’ve just started writing poetry though, hope to get better at it. Thank you. ❤
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If it’s pure fiction, it makes you even greater a writer. Pure genius! I have shared it on social media.
Blessings and LOve ❤
Anand 🙂
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Thank you so much! 😀 for the share, too. 😀
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It’s my pleasure, you are very talented 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much. So are you. 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful. The words feel so real.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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One word:
WOW
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Thank you so much. 😀
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Excellent write.
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Thanks, Amitav. 🙂
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Welcome. 🙂
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😀
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This is beautiful stuff
And the pieces of your poetry had indeed stuck in my mind. Amazing 🙂
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Thank you so much, Pavan. 🙂
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U r WC Miss Thief 🙂
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😀
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I demand your name under amendment 502C
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Hahaha, I don’t know what that is, but sounds scary, so let me comply. Rupali. 🙂
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Haha .. thank God u revealed your name or i would have this phobia of remembering you as “thief”
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Hahaha, I have never stolen any books though. Maybe I should start. Live up to my name?
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You are indeed stolen the show with your posts. Just viewed couple of them. Definitely unique. You got a lot of skills
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Aw, thank you so much. *blushes*
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I can so relate to this. So vivid!
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Thank you. 🙂
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This is what love is all about! I heard once- if it is not mad, it is not love ❤ Love is empowering as well as weakening ❤
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Exactly. ❤
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Awesome !
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Thank you. 😀
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Welcome !
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Whoa!
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*grins* 😀
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*can’t stop wondering*
*thinks grinning is cute*
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Haha, it IS, it is! 😀 What are you wondering about, since then? 😛
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I don’t know really. A lot of things at once.
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Things like what? *guarded expression*
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Work, life, pain, people, emotions….
Dude, I think a lot and about a lot things.
I am complicated or just plain weird.
*lowers gaze*
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Aw, you’re not the only one. *pats shoulder*
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🙂
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My best friend would so relate to this! You have a great way with words, Rupali! I read that this is fiction, and I admire you even more. This is amazing!
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Thank you so much, Uday. Everything I write is fiction, except from those crazy posts about my life. *chuckles* Thank you so much! 😀
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Love is the best disease in the world
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I suppose it is!
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Nice one.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Makes me wonder what broke him/her into shards…..now s/he can’t do anything but cut and bleed anyone he/she touches……
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Aren’t we all a little broken?
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True. Only the shattered cut others though. Loved the post…
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Thank you. 🙂
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Miss.Thief, poetry unlike prose makes you feel for the words sculptured it, where as in prose Its all about knowing and realizing it. You made me feel it. Thank you.
Last two lines were amazing, it reminds me of something and someone,
Sometimes a night changes a life
Sometimes the wait keeps you alive
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Thank you so much. 🙂 Is that someone who I think it is?
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Yeah! That someone and the someone you’re thinking about are not different. Miss. Thief some stolen things remains stolen even after finding it.
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True. So true. You should make that line into a post, or a poem.
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It was actually lifted from a poem of mine, titled “Been in love”.
If you have feelings or a thing for someone you’ll love it. 😊
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I don’t, but I’m sure I will love it anyway. 🙂 Let me read it.
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Oops sorry😛 I messed it out, I thought you were talking about the former line but it turns out that you were actually specifying the latter line which had a bit of relevance to the former line . Hahaha! Miss. thief I got confused
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Hehehe, it’s alright.
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I cannot relate to this but just trying to catch the described feeling like an actor, to perceive it in order to be able to perform, is a challenging self-experiment triggered by this poem. Your imagination must be a wide open space for such provoking thoughts on human nature. Well done!
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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one word
outstanding !!
god bless !!
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Thank you. 😀
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You are welcome!!
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🙂
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Awesome! Loved each and every line of it. When it’s the loved one, there is a pleasure in pain and every line shouts in loud.
I could resist myself from reading it twice! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Prakash. 😀
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My, I guess a man would break every time for a woman like this 🙂
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🙂
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You did it again. You went and wrote something that I want to immediately reblog because it so clearly depicts something in my life. I can’t wait for you to do it again.
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Aw, thank you so much, babe. Maybe we’re really related. :O
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A lost at birth story…now there’s a plot
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There sure is. We should write a book on it!
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Reblogged this on Among other things, J and commented:
For past me, dreams, and bits of Florida too
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Thanks for the reblog. ❤
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Always a pleasure
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😀
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Deep and beautiful.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Fantastic and emotional writing ~
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Beautifully emoted 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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OMg!this is one of thebest things i’ve ever read.I too am loving the way you are intimidated with the pain that comes from love!
great words,simlpy awesome.
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Thank you so much, Daisy. 😀
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You are welcome 🙂
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🙂
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That sings a sweetly sour note of poison love
Friggin dreamboat read!
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Thank you. 🙂
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🙂 Sheldon
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🙂
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Love this piece
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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You are so welcome
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🙂
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This is amazing
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Can I please discuss some stuff regarding blogging with you?
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Sure. 🙂 What did you want to discuss about?
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How do you get so many likes
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Um, I don’t know.
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Alright. Thank you for your time
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Visit a lot of blogs and comment on them. Get them to notice you. 🙂
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I can relate in a way. Now I’m in a hurry to pull them off me but when I start picking at them I want to leave them in there…
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So beautiful!! ❤
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Thank you. 🙂
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If you want to pull them off, pull them off quickly. Like John Green said, it only hurts for five seconds when you’re ripping off a band-aid.
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That was so powerful and devastating. I don’t believe that love has to be like this, so full of lofty highs and bone crushing lows. I used to believe that though, and I think that so many people still do.
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Thank you so much! I don’t believe love has to be like this, either.
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I dunno if it could do justice to this, but i wud say ‘sublime’…..this is exceptional writing!
My fav, “….The pain kills me, but makes me feel alive…”
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Hi. Thank you so much. 😀 That’s one of my favourite lines, too. 😀
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I really enjoyed “Broken Glass.” Can’t wait to explore the rest of your writing.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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I love your written voice. A beautiful poem. Have a lovely weekend!
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Thank you so much! 🙂 Have a lovely weekend. 🙂
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This . is . beautiful! Soo deep yet simple!
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Thank you so much, Jade. 🙂
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Your welcome book thief! Love the name too!
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Thanks, again. 🙂
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Haga thanks for the follow! 🙂
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My pleasure. 🙂
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😀
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Wonderful blog!!! love your poems!!
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Thank you so much! 😀
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“All you are is mean”..Taylor Swift
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Never heard of it.
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K…
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This is superb!
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Thank you so much. Coming from you, that’s a huge compliment, your poems are amazing. 😀
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Love this poem; MIss Book Thief. You are very talented. But “literature is your porn?” That made my day. GREAT BLOG AND CREATIVITY.
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Haha, thank you so much. *bows*
Hehe, I love my blog name, too. 😉
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This poem has remained in me like those broken shards of glass. Powerful imagery.
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Thank you, again. 😀
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Reblogged this on Lovely Wounded Lady Says ….
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Thank you for the reblog. 🙂
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You have a talent that far exceeds many professional authors I have read. The words flow effortlessly and allow the reader to create their own image and feelings rather than relying on the author’s emotions. This takes great skill.
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Thank you very much. That is an amazing compliment, and I’m glad to be on the receiving end of it. 🙂
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This resonates with me on a personal love… More than anything else… love is synonymous with pain.
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Glad you could relate. 🙂
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