With your intellect
Set my mind on fire
And, watch
As my words
And thoughts
Crumble to ashes
Until, only
Feelings remain.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
This is something that I just wrote. Does this even make sense?
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I love this!:)
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Thanks, Seth. 🙂 So glad you do!
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Yup it does! 😉
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Thank you! ^_^
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You’re most welcome 😃
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🙄
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This isssss awesome!! yes it does make sense.. yes it does make me go back to my past!! and yes it does relate!!! :*
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I’m glad it does! 😀 Thank you, sweetie. :*
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With loads of Love dear! :*
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❤ :*
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Feelings remain 😦 Awesome! *claps*
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Thank you, honey. :*
*bows*
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Yes it does make sense. 😛
And I love it ♡
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Hehe, thank god. xD
Thank you. ❤ :*
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Would you mind if I replace couple of lines while reading like below?
With your love
set my heart on fire
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That won’t make any sense. Setting heart on fire would not go with words and thoughts crumbling to ashes. I wanted to convey something different, but it’s your wish.
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okay 🙂
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🙂
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It’s really good 😀 Just love your style of writing 🙂 keep writing like this
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Thank you so much! ^_^
What is your real name, by the way?
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I don’t really tell people but anyways it doesn’t matter 😛
It’s Shivam
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Haha, it’s good to meet you, Shivam. 🙂 Where are you from?
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Like Country or city?
I am from India.
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I guessed that already. I meant city. 😛
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Delhi lol 😛
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Haha, alright. 😛
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Mail me on SkullWarlock00100@gmail.com if you wanna talk 😀
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Sure. 🙂
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I did.
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I certainly makes sense!
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oops! IT certainly makes sense!
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Hehe. Thank you, Rob. 😀 (I hope I’m not wrong. Your name, I mean.)
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You’re welcome! And yes, you got my name right. 😀
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Phew! Haha. 😀
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It does. You have a real talent for editing your words. Love it.
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Thank you so much, sweetie. xx
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You’re welcome x
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Bahut Khub.Rupaliji.
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😀
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Welcome.
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It makes sense to me. I would say it in a splendid and eloquent way makes me re-examine what the word “intellect” actually implies or as to its nature. I reflexively jump to think of it solely meaning “the faculty of reasoning and understanding objectively”. While this still works, it works better if “intellect” in this context understood as “mental powers,” which is more expansive. There is the notion out there of “emotional intelligence” that is intertwined with the traditional understanding of intelligence. Another way I see it as an “intellect” so infused with passion that it able to break down the abstract reasoning and objectivity of another.
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Yes yes yes! So glad it made sense to you! 😀
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This is stunning imagery, penned beautifully. It’s one of the most romantic pieces I have read today…to undress the mind through intellect until there is nothing left but feelings…your pen knows no limits 😀
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That’s exactly what I wanted to convey! 😀 Thank you so much, Thomas! ^_^
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🙂 You are most welcome, my friend 😀
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^_^
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🙂
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It makes all the sense to me! 👏 brief pieces have such an effect on the reader. 😄
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Thank you so much, sweetie. ❤
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Reblogged this on Impromptu Promptlings and commented:
Such agony! The little Book Thief outright hurt my heart with this one! Sigh… (I think that’s pretty much how Plato reached me so deeply.)
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Thank you so so much! 😀
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I forgot to breathe when I was reading that! WOW!
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Thank you, again! 😀 *grinning*
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Oooh, nice!
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Thank you. 🙂
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I thought it was very good and it did make sense, :).
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Thank you. 🙂
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🙂
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i have to say this is one of those few blogs that i usually check up on just to see the latest posts. your poems are really breathtaking and so for that massive talent of yours i have nominated you for the Liebster award-also you are super young!!! i will put the post up on monday though so this is just a heads up otherwise, keep doing what you are doing, you inspire. with love, Eye candy.
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Thank you so much, this means a lot. 😀
And, thank you in advance for the award as well! 😀
You just made my day. 🙄
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You deserve it.
With love, Eye candy
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^_^
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So sweet and lovely 🙂 ❤
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Thank you. 🙂
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So sweet.
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Thank you, my friend. 🙂
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I think it does. 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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It makes loads of sense. Well penned
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Thank you, Dave. 🙂
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Simple but profound! Keep writing lady 🙂
And visit me too *wink*
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Thank you. 😀
Haha, I will.
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