You smear your
Unfinished poetry
Written with ink
Dipped in melancholy
Across your cheeks
Thinking loneliness
Would look
Good on you-
All I can do
Is write
In between the lines
With ink
Tinged with hope
And pray
That you’d
Let me be
The end to your
Unfinished poetry.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
This is getting ridiculous, but I have exams. AGAIN. And, I may have to disappear again for a while.Β
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π don’t get lost in books π all d best
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Haha, thank you. I’ve already started reading an amazing book. π
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Name? Awww you are hiding again hmm
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Forty rules of love.
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π Love should not have rules hahaha π
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Haha
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π ok u go n engulf in book π
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Beautiful and brilliant.:0)
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Thank you so much. π Sorry for the very late reply. *hides face*
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Life is like that sometimes.:0)
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Hehe. π
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UH-mazing π
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Thanks, love. :*
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Aw man. I feel you here.
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Sometimes though, you just can’t bring yourself to finish something. Even if continuing it hurts you. To some people, pain is the proof that they are alive, and if they finish the things that hurt them, a part of their soul dies.
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I agree. Reminds me of this quote from Grey’s Anatomy. “Maybe we like the pain, maybe we are wired that way. Because, without the pain, who would we be?”
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Love the message of hope.
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Thank you so much. π Sorry for the late reply.
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You are welcome.
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Your moments away make your posts all the sweeter to read π
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Hey, sweetie! I’m back! π
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Yay!!
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Oh, I love this one. Great work.
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Thank you so much, Andrew. π
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It’s beautiful as always π
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Thank you, Sumit. π
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Wow! It’s amazing!…. As always! π
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Thank you so much. π
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Best of luck, and hurry on back!
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I’m back!
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Welcome back! π
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So, so beautiful! I know I’ve been spamming this one word on your blog but that’s only because I know no other to convey the beauty of your poetry.
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Haha, that’s okay. I happen to like that word, especially when it’s being linked with my poetry. π Thank you so much. π
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^_^ β€
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I loved it! What a wonderful read! π
Happy to connect β€
Do check out my writings too, will appreciate your reviews π
https://t.co/gj37sbr7Xp
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Haha, such a co-incidence. I was JUST reading your post! I followed your blog long back, we’ve even talked once. How did I manage to miss your posts. *hides face*
And, thanks, love. β€
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I was thinking the same! How did I miss yours before!!!!
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WP works in mysterious ways. Haha! Nice to meet you. Again. xD
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Loved it esp.the last line..
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Thank you so much. π
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Wonderful piece… I fell in love with each and every line as I read it again and again! π
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Thank you so much. ^_^
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Always welcome!
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Lovely! π
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Thank you. π
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Welcome π
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Excellent finish π Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much. π
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This is just lovely! π
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Thank you, Shweta. π
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Reblogged this on Inkfelt.
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This is wonderful! Love your poetry!
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Thank you so much. π
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This is breathtaking!
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Thank you so much. π
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Definitely a great write. Enjoyed it.
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Thank you so much. π
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Lovely
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Thank you π
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Formidable poem!
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Thank you. π
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That is so beautiful
full of pain and hope
love and loss
oh the colors
and the contrast
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Thank you so much. π
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Delightfully heart-warming.
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Thank you. π
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Profound and inspiring piece π
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Thank you. π
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Absolutely love this!!!!
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Thank you so much, Laura. π
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It’s amazing π
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Thank you so much. π
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Great read
Simply beautiful
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Thank you, Sheldon. π
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I stumbled upon this poem while reflecting on my own melancholy writing. What a lovely surprise π
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Thank you so much, glad you dropped by π
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These kids of pieces just leave me in awe and I am like “where does such beauty and depth come from?”
Great work!
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Thank you so much. π
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“If There Should Be Another,” poem:
https://merrittcorrigan.wordpress.com/2016/08/16/if-there-should-be-another/
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Amazing..liked it..
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Thank you. π
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Profound!
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Thank you. π
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I love this! So beautiful. Would love to have a mind like yours, I fail horrifically in comparison
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I’m sure that is not true. Thank you so much. π
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Beautiful πππ
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Thank you. π
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The name of your blog is strikingly appropriate- because this was near orgasmic. Beautiful.
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Hi. Thank you so much. π
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Great poem! I really like your writing style and the figurative language you use! It really speaks to me because I have books of unfinished poetry that I need to get back to! I look forward to more work from you!
I just posted a poem that may be of interest to you: https://zoneofnonbeing.wordpress.com/2016/09/07/when-my-heart-stops/
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Thank you so much, glad you liked it. π Will check your poem out.
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When entangled together and almost a mess. An end to the beginning Praise the lord Ive been blessed. All is better when with you my loneliness not one but two. Its poetic love my dreams come true unfortunately poems balls blue.. Its a joke to make you smile. Poetry placed in poetry piles. Walk my poetry lines for miles thank you love and god and child.
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Powerful love
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Thanks. π
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Nominated u for The Blogger Recognition Award. Check my blog.
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Thank you. π
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Welcome Darling π
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This is great!
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Thank you. π
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It was a wonderful read.
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Thank you. π
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Hey, amazing!!
Check out my work at justrantingscom.wordpress.com
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Of course. Thank you so much. π
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I loved it!..the essence of it!!!
I too wrote a piece…
would love if you check it out…
https://justrantingscom.wordpress.com/2016/09/22/amidst-the-murk/
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Thank you so much. π I will definitely check it out. π
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So lovely… so beautiful
mirrors my own thoughts
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Thank you so much. π Sorry for the late reply.
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