There seems to be
A lot of heartbreak
Lying around these days.
*
People collect it in tiny jars,
And display it proudly on their shelves
As if it is a thing of pride.
Some wear it like the most
Magnificent of pearls,
Shiny and sparkling,
Around their neck
That when you see them,
It is the first thing you notice.
Yet others try to escape it
By locking it shut deep inside a poem,
But sometimes it comes wafting out
Passing the heartbreak on
To the readers.
*
Stop wearing a crown of heartbreak;
Don’t convert pain into poetry.
*
Go to the ocean and listen to the music
Swim back to you in waves.
Collect the magic in tiny jars
And shake them loose
On a particularly bad day-
Let them fall all around you
Like confetti,
And drench you in happiness.
*
Dip your toes in music,
And let it travel through your veins
Reaching every nerve-ending
Of your body,
And making it come alive
So that when people look at you
All they can see is the music
Swimming in your eyes
And their whole body starts dancing.
*
Take a plunge into music,
And write poetry with your movements
Everywhere you go.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
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Thank you. π
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This is one of your best writes. Awesome in detail and metaphors.
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Thank you so much, Andrew. π
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There seems to be a lot of heart-break lying around these days. And somebody just strung it all together into a beautiful poem! π
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Thank you so much. β€
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It is an amazing thing watching you blossom and flourish. With every post, I am happy to see your words among many… Especially for these lines:
“Stop wearing a crown of heartbreak;
Donβt convert pain into poetry.
*
Go to the ocean and listen to the music
Swim back to you in waves.
Collect the magic in tiny jars
And shake them loose
On a particularly bad day-
Let them fall all around you
Like confetti,
And drench you in happiness.
*
Dip your toes in music,
And let it travel through your veins
Reaching every nerve-ending
Of your body,”
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Thank you so much, ma’am. ^_^ β€
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You are most welcome!
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Rups. Mayen. How do you manage to make every poem so damn beautiful? How? *sigh*
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Ayyeeeee, Vi. Dhanyavad. *closes eyes out of shyyyness* π
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Hahahha ππ
No mention.πΉ
I don’t know what “You’re very welcome” translates to. Ugh I suck. I dunno hindi and it’s supposed to be my mother tongue.*makes a face*
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Even I don’t know what you’re welcome translates to. π
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*relieved sigh* Cool, then.*wide grin*
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Exams from tomorrow. *cries*
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Eeeeeep.π
Elections tomorrow.*smirks*
My semester is just starting properly. So, no tests in sight as of yet.*does a happy dance*
But, all the very best, Rups.*looks worried now*
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*looks at you with narrowed eyes* Okay, imma need some haaalp from you about colleges and stuff. I’ll ask after exams, yeah? π
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So, you mean, we will talk about stuff other than WP? Real life stuff? Greaaaaaaaat. I love talking, in case you don’t know.*grins slyly*
So, tell me whenever.*grins*
Ugh I sound like a retard who has no contact with real people in the real world and is desperate for some real conversation. *tries to stare herself down in the mirror*
Go rock the exams, Rupsie.β
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Even I love talking, but only with a few. With others, I just smile and nod. People actually think I’m silent. *evil smile* xD Okayyy, love. We shall talk sooon. π
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Hahahaha well, nobody has any doubts about my babbling.*Laughs*
We shall.*Nods*
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This was beautiful!
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Thank you. π
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Hi, I haven’t been hear in awhile and you’ve gotten even better!! I’ve nominated you for the 3 Days 3 Quotes Challenge.
P.S. I really enjoy your blog. π
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Thank you so much. π I enjoy reading yours, too. π
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Thank you π
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https://redroseonasnowybench.wordpress.com/2016/07/31/three-days-three-quotes-challenge-day-1/ here are the rules
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…write poetry with your movements… What a luscious line!
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Thank you, ma’am. π
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Nice! π
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Thank you. π
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Beautiful! No we shouldn’t hide or pain or keep it inside. It’s good to let go and move on when we’re able.
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Yes! That is why I never write about my experiences. Thank you, Mandi. π
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A beautiful work of art. Splendid, i should say, someday i will write like you! π
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Thank you so much, Radha. π
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Loved this!
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Thank you. π
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“And write poetry with your movements
Everywhere you go.”
beautiful…. π
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Thank you so much, Teena. π
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you are welcome….!
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10000% Agreed! beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much. π
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This is piece is beautifully put together.Great work!
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Thank you so much. π
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You’re just becoming just better day by day!! You’re AWESOME!!
Keep Writing! π
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Thank you so much. π You are awesome as well. π
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No way! I can’t even compare me or my blog to yours.. you’re just nailing it!!
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I disagree. π
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Oh dear.. cmon have fun girl!π
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Wonderful. Absolutely wonderfully beautiful.
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Thank you so much. π
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Your welcome
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This is soul touchingly brilliant. :”)
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Thank you, miss calcutta. π
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π π
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So beautiful and inspiring!! :,)
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Thank you so much. π
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Ah, how thoughtful. You are very true. If only people would listen to you. Good job.
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Thank you so much. π
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Loved it
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Thank you. π
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‘Dip your toes in music and let it travel through your veins’-wow beautiful
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Thank you so much. π
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Hi I’m new to the blogging life and was wondering if you could read my work and follow me I’d appreciate it as i am interested in literature and spoken word and lack a bit of confidence Thank you for your time and have a nice day
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Will check out your page. π
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I wish there was a button for love but I guess the like button will have to do.
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Hi, thank you so much. ^_^ means a lot to me. π
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No probs π
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