If I showed you
The cracks in my heart
Would you pour your love
Into them
And, seal them
With kisses, ever so soft?
*
If I showed you
My scars
Would you run your
Fingers through them
Your touch, feather light?
*
If I showed you
My darkest side
Would you hang a moon
In there
And bring some light?
*
If I showed you
The dustiest corners
Of my soul
Would you collect all the dust
And blow them away?
*
If I showed you
The monsters
That lurk in the corners
Of my mind
Would you dance with them?
*
If I showed you
Who I really am
Would you love me
For all that I am?
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
Yes, I would love your heroine. Such amazing words my friend. There aren’t many blogs that have as many gems as yours does. Bravo.
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Thank you so much, Andrew. 😀 Your comments really mean a lot to me. 🙂
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Smiling.
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🙂
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All of our flaws make us unique, and interesting individuals. I loved the poem!
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Yes, they do. Without them, we wouldn’t be ourselves. Thank you. 😀
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Utterly lovely, this!
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Thank you! 🙂
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This is simply beautiful…we all want to find that someone who not noly accepts us for who we are, but will also work to seal those wounds and heal those scars…I love, love, love it!!
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Thank you so very much! 😀 Yes, someone like that would be beautiful, wouldn’t it?
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You are welcome… yes, it would be great and some of us are lucky enough to find a love like this…I hope you find it, too 😀
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I hope so too, haha. 😀
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😀 😀
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These are the thoughts that come across our mind when we are falling for someone and yet scared and insecure 🙂 So beautiful and powerful
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Thank you, Sanghamitra. 🙂 Yes, these are the thoughts that might come across our minds, but, this one is fiction. 😛
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Yes I know 😛
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Hahaha. 😛
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This was so good.
Our flaws make us who we are,don’t they?
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Yes, they do. 🙂 Thank you, Annie. 🙂
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respect
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😀
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Simply good stuff!!
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Thank you. 🙂
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👍
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🙂
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Impressive, I am short on words.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Love this!
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Thank you. 🙂
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This was utmost brilliance. Seemingly purified thoughts. 👍
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Thank you so much, Saiz. 😀
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Loved it gal!!! Amazingly written 🙂
Keep the momentum going 🙂
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Thanks, sweetie. 😀
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You are welcome baby 🙂
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😀
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Lovely.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Welcome.
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Beautiful lines !
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Thank you, Aneesh. 🙂
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Yes
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🙂
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Lovely! 🙂
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Thanks, Jahnavi. 🙂
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Amazing, hats off ,girl !
Btw, wt is ur name ? :p we know much about each other now , bt ur name is still a suspense for me :p Hehe..
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Thanks, sweetie. 😀
My name is Rupali, hehehe. 😛
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Oh, so Rupali (didi) , u write really well ♡
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You don’t have to call me didi. 😛 And, thanks sweetheart. ❤ So do you. 😀
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Haha.. okay 😉
And no need , plz ♡
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No need kiske liye? Thanks ke liye? 😛
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Haan😂
Haha..
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Haha, alright. 😛
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Honest writing cant gets more honest than this
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😀
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What awe inspiring poem. Especially for me since someone already did do that for me 🙄
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Thanks, Hiba. And, that is amazing. 😀
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^_^
Truly a pleasure. Amazing poem :))
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Thank you. 😀 What do you do, by the way?
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Studying. I have caught a break currently due to our current financial situation, but it’s getting better now, Alhamdulillah, so I’ll soon start with ACCA inshaAllah 🙂
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All the best, then. 😀
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Thanks 🙂
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This is just Beautiful!
If ever anybody would show.
It does require so much of love to answer the questions.
Very Good!
Shiva
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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hey just want to ask u would u like to b a co author for a book ….looking for one
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I’m sorry, I absolutely cannot co-author with anybody. I’m a control freak and I would want to write the whole thing my way. *hides face* I’m honoured you thought of me, but I’m sorry. 🙂
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ahh its okay no prob 🙂
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I would have said ‘Yes.’ Lol 🙂
Well, the poem is so romantic and pleased me!
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I’m glad it did. 🙂
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Of course yea, that’s so nice poem..
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Thank you. 🙂
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Welcome dear
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🙂
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😀
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Beautiful
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Thank you. 🙂
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A very Beautiful piece! thanks to share 🙂
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Thank you, Deepak. 🙂
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ur welcome! Rupali! 🙂
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Where did you read my name? 😛
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i guess you’ve write it somewhere!
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Haha, alright.
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This is poignant but oh so beautiful! Love it.
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Thank you so much. 😀
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u write good poetry…don’t ya!! 🙂 this is a really good one!
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Thank you! 😀
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One of the best romantic work ❤
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Thanks, Darsh. 🙄
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Amazing ! Reminded me of the song ‘locked away’. Loved the flow.
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I’m not familiar with the song. Who’s it by? And, thank you! 😀
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Locked away – Adam levine ft R.City 🙂
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I’ll check it out. I love Adam Levine. *insert dreamy eyes* Haha!
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Then you must have loved “Lost stars”. Such a soulful track.
*happy peeps*
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Umm.. I haven’t listened to it. *hides my face* A friend asked me to listen to it, and I still haven’t gotten around to doing it. I haven’t listened to any new songs in a while. *sigh*
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I’m going just awww on all your poems!! 😍😍 truly amazing!!
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Thank you, thank you. *blush* ^_^
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beautiful… 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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You write so beautifully.Simply Great! 🙂
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Thank you so much, again. ^_^
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