You smell like love-
like beautiful,
empty promises
filled with
grisly remorse
pumped full of
electrifying pheromones
*
You taste like
forgotten dreams
forged in a
beautiful disaster
with lava running
through your veins
as bubbles erupt from
your porous eyes,
*
and the reverie
nestled behind
my naive eyes
scrambles toward
your metamorphic facade
hoping to break
through the visage
of bittersweet
permeable lies
swimming through
such viscous scum.
Β© Miss Book Thief and Christopher Rupley
(This is my first collaboration with Christopher from The Brown Bag Special. ClickΒ hereΒ to check his work, he is amazing.)
Nice collaboration! (y)
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Thanks, honey. π He did most of the work. π xD
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That’s okay! In the next one, you can work more π Honey β€
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β€ β€
Hope so, Darsh. π
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Lovely write!
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Thank you, Sofia. π
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Awesome! π
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wonderful poem … once again..
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Thank you. π
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beautiful π
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Thanks, Teena. π
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Lovely read!
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Thank you π
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Collaboration produced a beautiful baby, nee poem.:) Just wondering how the volcanic tempers were controlled during collaboration.
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Hehe, thank you. π
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The two of you make an explosive combination. Good stuff!
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Thanks, Bun. π
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Reading this was like, somebody pulled off the rug from underneath me! Fantastic, energetic and volcanic indeed!
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Thanks, Swetha. Glad you liked it. π
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Wonderful.
Excellent collab π
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Thank you. π
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Love how to used the volcano
Beautiful
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Thank you. π
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Wow.. Very good collaboration… Amazing poem.. π
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Thank you. π
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Always welcome.. π
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π
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Beautiful.
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Thank you. π
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Welcome ji.
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Beautiful collaboration… your styles blend well together
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Thank you. π
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Beautiful dark and so well written π
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Thanks, again. ^_^
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