Poetry is not
In the words
It is in
The spaces between-
So heavy
With feeling
That when
The poet shivers
You feel
The cold.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
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The words unsaid
But not unread…..beautiful
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Thank you. π
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WOW
This is incredible, I like it a lot β€
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Thank you so much, Akanksha. β€
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Excellent! Love it. Really well captured π
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Thank you, Ryan. π
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True that! Very well expressed π
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Thank you, Hargun. π
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Welcome back π
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Thanks, Shoaib. π
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Beautiful
Very precise words n deep feelins
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Thank you so much. π
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Pleasures myn :d
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welcome back baby π
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Hey, sweetie. ^_^
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Lovely – enjoyed this:-)
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Jeez! So well crafted! ππ
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Haha, thank you so much. π
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Oh you’re welcome
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Beautiful, deep words.
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Thank you, Vidisha. π
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This was a great one. Almost gave me shivers. Bravo.
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Thank you. π
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Lovely!
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Bahut Khub Rupali ji.
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An effective poem. “The spaces between” hold many things. Most which people don’t seem to see or understand, like “feelings.”
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Exactly. Thank you. π
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A resounding yes to these lines:
“That when
The poet shivers
You feel
The cold.”
And, to your return to WP. Welcome back~
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Thank you so much. π
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You are most welcome!
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I missed you and love your stuff.
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Thank you, darling. π
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Beautiful..
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^_^
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I understand these spaces between.
In between is this Appreciation for YOU.
I have nominated You for “Blogger Appreciation Award”
Shiva
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Thank you so much, Shiva. π
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I love those last four lines. I don’t share other’s work very often but I think I will have to for this.
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Thank you so much, Carol. π
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Amazed! Loved the last lines the most. Perfect! Thanks for sharing ! π
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Oh, thank you so much. π
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You’re welcome:)
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Wow! That’s so simple and unique! π A very nice and warm one..
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Thank you so much, Prakash. π
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Aw, and we have missed you too! Welcome back. Truly, poetry is feeling the emotions the poet didn’t spell out.
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Thank you, dear. Missed you, too!
Indeed. π
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Exactly..”..when
The poet shivers
You feel
The cold” π A poet is the most empathetic of all people.
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Yes, true. π
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