You broke my heart,
Into a million pieces.
All the love I had,
Escaped through the cracks.
Lit up the whole wide world,
Left me empty instead.
-R
You broke my heart,
Into a million pieces.
All the love I had,
Escaped through the cracks.
Lit up the whole wide world,
Left me empty instead.
-R
Aw, that’s beautifully poetic but very sad.
He better watch out, though. If he can light up the whole world, the big energy companies will try to use him as an alternative energy source when all the fossil fuels run out. 😀
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Hahah! 😀 And, thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome. Despite my flippant comment, it really was a moving and beautiful sentiment. 🙂
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Thank you, again. 🙂
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Touché :’)
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Thank you. 🙂
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The pleasures all mine 🙂
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You have a great blog. 🙂
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Thank you but its not my blog , I mean it is now but it was opened by a dear friend of mine ‘Mr Simple’ , and your blog is way better than mine … I am still getting g there 🙂
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I’m just getting started too. Glad to meet you. 🙂
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Same here Miss Book thief 🙂
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*grins* 😀
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You know interactions like these make me want to blog , so if possible do check my next update , its about this bibliomaniac , Miss Book thief 😛 🙂
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I definitely will. Can’t wait. 😀 I hope you stick around, too. 🙂
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Sure 🙂
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🙂
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Its very short and convincing.
Its enough.
You said it.
But the empty part, I am not convinced.
As you say : “She read books as one would breathe air, to fill up and live” .
Is that right?
My Fond Regards to You,
Shiva
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Haha, thank you. And, its just something that I wrote. It isn’t inspired by my life. 🙂
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Now this is called a poem brimming with Love, for the whole world has been painted with Love.
I know you are empty inside, but hope the love comes back to you soon!
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This wasn’t inspired from my life. And, thank you. 🙂
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After reading such powerful words, I would never doubt your ability to write 😉
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Thanks! *huge grin* 😀
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Heart-breaking but heart-touching poem..
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Thank you. 🙂
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Welcome to my blog
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Thanks for dropping by mine. 🙂
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This one was short and beautiful. Didn’t fail to touch the heart.
Keep up the good work!
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Thank you so much. 😀
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“You broke my glass,
Into a million pieces.
All the whiskey I had,
Escaped through the cracks.
Lit up my entire soul in fury,
and left me thirsty indeed.”
🙂 Nice poem.. works for me..
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Hahaha, you could post that.
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Thank you, thank you.. mharo tharo nahin.. baaki, khabar natthi…
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What language is that? :O
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oh dear… just tried it out 😦 Supposedly Gujarati … hahaha.. “not mine not yours.. the rest I don’t know”.. is what I intended to say 😦
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Haha, I don’t know Gujarati.
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ok, what language do you speak? apart from English, I mean..
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Hindi, Tamil, Marathi. I know a bit of german and kannada. 😀
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Oho… Benglura? sari sari.. gottaagilla..
Mala marathi barobar aeth nahin.. pann mala koi problem nahin.. majhi bhasha konkani ani kannad aahey, ani Malayalam, ani Tulu, ani Hindi, ani.. etc etc etc..
German? Nein, nein.. hilfe..please don’t inflict THAT on me now..
Appdiya? Tamil theriyaad.. manninchiringo.. Ungalku Malayalam theriyuma.. ? Enna idu, bloody show off.. cho chorry 😀
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Haha, I don’t know malayalam, but I can understand some of it. 🙂
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hmm.. 🙂 I am not a Malayali, if that is what you are guessing 😀
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Damn it. I THOUGHT you were one! But then I saw your other comment, and now I’m confused. 😛
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hmm.. why would you say that.. hmm.. so who is the Malayali fellow then? hunh? hunh??
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And it is all your fault.. with a name like that, what else would I think? but Rupali Shah (pronounced Saah.. jaishrikrishna Saah-ben.. or Khaana khaake jaana, eh? Rupali-ben) or Rupali Patel… er.. whatever..
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Hahaha. What’s your mother tongue?
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we…eelll… don’t have one.. in my daughter’s case it is even worse.. a nightmare actually.. can’t even call me a half-breed.. but my daughter.. poor thing.. she defines national integration.. hahaha..
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Hahaha! 😀
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Kaigo? aai baba chi maar padli kai? 😀 Mulgi Blog-var kai kai sanghto… :O ho!!! Barobar aahe… 😀
No worries.. aata tu zop.. udya sakali meluyaan…
🙂 Take care.. see you soon.. haha..
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My marathi is different from bombay marathi, hehe. 😛
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Ah, there you go.. now I know exactly what you are.. you have given yourself away.. 😀 Shaanav kuli.. or Naik, I bet.. 🙂
Kithey, aaramey?? 🙂
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Hahaha, nope. I don’t really have a surname, though. 😀
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right, but Belgaum, Karwar, Hubli. Solapur etc.. right?
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Hahaha, nope. 😀
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oh.. kshatriya? kote? ok, never mind.. if you had tell me, you would have told me haha.. 🙂 Nah, don’t worry about it.. just messing with you, that is all.. Don’t be mad at me, I am quirky like that sometimes.. and I sometimes get carried away with it..
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Haha, I’m not mad at you. And, seriously, I don’t have a surname.
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Neither do I 🙂 So we are even … haha
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Haha, hi-five, then. 😀
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Ouch, no hands, Rupali.. useless limbs.. and if I really did a high-five I would regret it for the next one hour.. with all the tingling and the electric shocks hahaha..
But yes, high-five, virtually 😀
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Haha, virtually is fine. 😀
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Thanks, Rupali.. you are a good sport.. and I like you very much for that.. I get away with nonsense speaking to you 🙂 SO thank you for that..
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Haha, no problem. 😀 Lord knows, I have a lot of people who put up with me. 😀
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Nah, you are naturally sweet.. you would probably give people diabetes 😀
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Aww, who’s being sweet now? 😀 And, I’m a pain-in-the-ass. *nods* Hehehe
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well, stop right there.. 🙂 Anyway, I am glad I met you.. you make me smile..
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This is great.
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Thank you, Gretal. 🙂
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Loved it…
Thank you for sharing!!
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Thank you so much. 😀
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I consider myself tho be lucky to be associated with such a variety of superb writings and ideas…
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Oh, you’re too kind. *blushes*
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An just being honest…
I have always surrounded by my books that are far far away from emotions… Only this wp forum have me this opportunity to learn & appreciate
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🙂 Thank you, again.
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This is interesting
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Your blog is amazing… Just going through it…. Loads to read..
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Thanks. *grins* I liked your blog, too. 🙂
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You must have understood how novice I am when it comes to writing about emotions!!!/
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You’ll get better with time. I really liked it. 🙂
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Thank you…
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Touching Feelings.Nice One.
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😀 Thank you so much!
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Ur Welcome.
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🙂
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