I built walls so high,
No one could climb it.
Waiting for someone,
Who cared enough to try.
A few tried,
But gave up after a while.
Guess they were too tired,
To climb so high.
And then you came along,
With a smile and a song.
Singing about how,
You wanted to break my walls down.
I watched you take a hammer to my walls,
From behind a closed window.
Waiting for you to give up,
Like so many others before.
I watched you work for days,
And weeks, and months.
Never giving up,
Never tiring.
Finally, I opened a window,
And you climbed inside.
And together we broke the walls,
That I had built so high.
You sang a song,
And I finally sung along.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
… that’s what it means to conquer a woman 😉
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Hehe 😀
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Lovely. I guess that using dinamyte or a wrecking ball would have been way less poetic… 😀
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Hahaha, yes. 😀 Thank you. 🙂
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Beautiful. You do know, however, that most men will make another connection with the hammer?
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Thank you. 🙂 What kind of connection do you mean? 😛
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It’s quite lewd… the sort of thing you don’t talk about in public
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Nice 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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Story in form of a poetry ..makes it more beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much, Neerja. 😀
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😀 Pleasure is all mine young lady 🙂
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😀
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🙂
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Sounds like a tough guy, climbing the walls have been easy but why give up when your destination is the most beautiful thing you’ve ever seen.
On a serious😮 note, he could have come like a wrecking ball and hit you so hard in love and then break your walls.
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Hahaha. Wouldn’t make for a very good poem, now would it? 😛
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Na, then it would become Mikey Cyrus’s circus. 😛
What you have penned is beautiful and shows what kind of heart you’re, a honest heart. I was just playing with words.
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Haha, I know. I do like that song, though. 😛 Thank you so much. ❤
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You like that song? OK then, take my serious note seriously. 😛
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Hehehe, just the audio. xD And, the lyrics. 😛
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Just the audio & lyrics Miss.thief, just the audio & lyrics 😛
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Hehehe. 😛
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Hard work pays off, both of you !
For you writing a poem , for him breaking a walls for you !
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Thank you. 🙂 And, this is fiction.
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Welcome!
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🙂
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☺
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This resonates to much with me. You described every emotion ❤️
Perfect!
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Thank you, Carisa. ❤
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Beautiful :’) ♡
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Thank you, Archie. ❤ Can I call you Archie? 😛
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Nicely written!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Profound.
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*bows*
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This is so cute :’) love this!
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Thank you so much! 😀
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Reminds me of the song. Beneath your beautiful. 🙂
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Who is it by? I’ve never listened to it.
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Labrinth ft Emile
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I’ll listen to it. 🙂
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Amazing as always 🙂 😛
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Thank you. 🙂
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That’s one of the most beautiful love stories I’ve ever read! :’D
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Thank you, girl. 😀
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Excellent!! Struck a chord in me 🙂
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Thank you so much, Prajakta. 😀
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or sometimes when the right person comes in, the walls you built, disappear!!
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True. 🙂
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It’s the most appropriate time that I am going through this wonderful and lovely work, a tiring, inspiring, piece, inspires to learn the power of tenacity, …
Thank you so much…. I have been trying hard and will be trying hard … this will certainly give a girls’ perceptive …
Thanks for sharing….
God bless!!
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Thank you. 🙂 No problem. 🙂
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: ) : )
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Sounds like the right one came along eh. 🙂 Vulnerability can be hard, but one can’t truly experience the true beauty of connection in relationships without it.
WooHoo! Tear down those walls.
🙂 ❤
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This is fiction. 😦 I agree. You can’t be in love if you aren’t willing to be stupid. 🙂
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Oh wow! It’s fiction. It seems so personal and real. Kudos to you girl.
Have a wonderful weekend Book Thief.
🙂
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Thank you so much, Stacy. Sorry for the late reply. 🙂 Have a nice day. 😀
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No problem. You have a nice day too.
🙂
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🙂
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Well done!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Brilliant!
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Thank you. 😀
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So romantically beautiful and awwww…:)
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Thank you, Charlie. 😀
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Loved, loved, loved it. Reblogging it 🙂
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Thank you so much, Ruma. 😀
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Reblogged this on Ruma Dak's Blog and commented:
i wish I had written this and yeah I had a reason as well 🙂
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😀 ❤
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Love and friendship can be a walls downfall.
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Awesome ❤
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Thanks, Darshith. ❤
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I apologize for posting this here, but I’ve nominated your blog for a creative blogging award. Please do not feel obligated to join in, but I wanted to let others know about your blog:
https://weight2lose2013.wordpress.com/2015/10/16/a-bling-thing/
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Thank you so much. 😀
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Beautiful and so romantic!
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Thank you. 😀
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So beautifully written ! 🙂
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Thank you so much. 😀
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So beautifully written 🙂
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Beautifully written. It will be a pleasure following your blog. You are an amazing talent.
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Thank you, I loved your blog, too. 😀
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Thanks
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🙂
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I did one with the walls, although it was nothing as refreshing as this. I can only write about melancholy I guess 😀 Do check it out sometime 🙂
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I will, I will. 🙂 I mostly write sad poems, too.
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I will check em out when I have time 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thanks, girl. 😀
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