Her whole body, exploded in happiness
From the tips of her fingers, to
The very core of her heart
You could see it in her eyes
It was like somebody
Had shone a light, into
A dark room
Drawn the blinds, and opened the windows
Letting a beam of light
Shine inside the dark and gloomy room
She was like a bird, that
Had finally figured out
How to fly
She walked out of her home
With her head held high, and
Her happiness lighting her up
Glowing like a firefly
In the dark dark streets
People watched in awe, at
This woman, whose whole body
Was exploding with fireworks
Like the fourth of July.
They talked about this woman
Who walked with the air
Of someone who knew
She was untouchable.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
P.S. Merry Christmas, y’all! π
A sweet and ecstatic poem that was.
Merry Christmas
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Thanks, Adhi. Merry Christmas to you, too. π
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A very great piece of poetry. Merry Christmas! Xx
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Thank you so much. π
Merry Christmas to you, too. π
xx
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You’re welcome π
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Awesome read ! π
Merry Christmas π
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Thank you so much, Pratyusha. π Merry Christmas. π Where are you from?
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You are welcome.I am from mumbai. How about you ?
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I live in Chennai. π What do you do?
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I am currently working in mumbai π
Working in tata technologies.
How about you ?
Studying or working ?
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Studying. Second year. π Math. π
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Ohh that was kind of unexpected π
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Why so? π
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Thought you would be someone at Grad or PG level person. That’s the maturity you show in your poems π
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Thank you. π I’m only 18 though. π
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Hahahah. I got that π
Thanks for making me feel very elderly π
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I’m sure you’re not THAT old. π
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What’s your guess girl ? π
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I’m gonna go with.. 23? Was I right? π
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Hahahha. I wish. But I am 25 yrs old π
But 18 at heart π
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25 isn’t old. π I’m sure you are. π
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Hahahah ya. Not too old. But old enough to get married. π
Which I don’t want to hahhah
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Find someone you wanna get married to. π Or, have you already? *winks*
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Hahah. Give your email id, then can answer that question π
Public forums are risky for such conversations hahahhahaha
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Hehehe, is facebook okay? I don’t open my e-mail at all. π
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Facebook is cool π
Will finally get to know your name π
Suspense to be revealed π
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Hehehe, its not a secret. I just don’t volunteer unless people ask. π
https://www.facebook.com/rupalijegan
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Hahahah.
Great. π
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Still waiting for your request. π
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Ahahha. I guess you have private settings, unable to send friend request π
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Can you send me a message, though? See if you can, I’ll change my settings otherwise.
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I did send you a message on fb. π
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Else search me on fb with the name Kapilavai Pratyusha. You will find a small kids pic, that would be me. π Not to mislead people.
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Hehehe, cute pic though. π
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Thank u π
See, would like to stay young forever.
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Hahaha, got that. π
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Very well written… π
Merry Christmas ti you… π
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Thank you. π Merry Christmas! π
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Im just gonna ignore the post script since I am a Muslim and Christmas is directly offensive to my belief, but woooowww, the poem is amazing. I loved the imagery. Those little descriptions.
“Her happiness lighting her up
Glowing like a firefly”
“She was like a bird, that
Had finally figured out
How to fly”
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Amazing lines :))
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That’s okay, Hiba. I’m not a Christian as well. And, thank you so much. ^_^ You write amazing poems, too. π Where are you from, by the way?
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Thank you π
I’m a Pakistani born and raised in Kuwait π
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Alright. π You have a lovely name. π
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Thank you π
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I am a fan of your poems! Seriously, love it.
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And I, a fan of yours. β€
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Merry Christmas πππ
Enjoyππ
Keep smiling, βΊ
-glee sparkleπ
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Merry Christmas. π Take care. π
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Merry Christmas! Have a blessed day.
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You too. π
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Reblogged this on My Daily Musing.
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Thanks for the reblog. π
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You’re very welcome, :).
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Merry Christmas, FrΓΆhliche Weihnachten, Feliz Navidad, ΡΡΠ°ΡΡΠ»ΠΈΠ²ΠΎΠ³ΠΎ Π ΠΎΠΆΠ΄Π΅ΡΡΠ²Π°, θθͺη―εΏ«ζ¨ π
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Hope you had a great time. π
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What a lovely “image” of happiness. π It would be so nice to feel that way now and then!
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Yes, it would. π Thank you so much. π
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This is really nice!
Although I am late, but merry Christmas and a happy new year!
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Thanks, Ti. π Wish you the same.
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So Nice,
Kuch Hindi Mein Bhi Ho Jaaye Naye Saal k Liye,If U Like Good Ji.
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Thank you. π My Hindi is not good enough to write poems. π
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As U Like,Jo Sahi Samjhein,Likhte To Bahut Logon Ko Acha Lagta Kyunki Jo Bhi Likhte Acha Hi Likhte.ji.
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Thank you so much. π Maybe someday. π
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Welcome ji.
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π
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Awesome
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Thank you so much. π
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I am so glad to have stumbled upon your page. Cheers!
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Thanks, again. π
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Have a look at my page as well, would love to hear the views of novel minded poet such as you.
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I did look at your page. I followed it as well. π
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I love love your poetry. Just found your blog, and it’s amazing π
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Thank you so much, Saloni. ^_^ Let me go look at yours now. π
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You had me smiling all the way. Loved it.
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Thank you, Andrew. π
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Hmmm Though very deep I am yet to find who is she!!! does it mean the untouchables in india?
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No, just a normal girl, who finally decided to be happy.
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π Yea tha’ts good
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