Heartbreak is
Like sitting in aΒ
Run down building, and
Painting the walls
Over and over, only
To have the paint
Peeled away every day.
*
Heartbreak is
The feeling of
Being trapped in quicksand
Where every step you
Take, ends with you
Being sucked in more.
*
Heartbreak is
The feeling of
Wrapping many blankets
Around yourself, but
Still feeling cold
To the bone.
*
Heartbreak is
Like walking inside
A dark tunnel, hoping
To reach the light
At the end soon,
Only to realize halfway
That the tunnel
Is endless.
*
Heartbreak is
Living among the
Dark clouds, and
Heartbreak is
The child who
Lost his dog, and
Heartbreak is
That devastatingly beautiful
Book you read, and
Heartbreak is you.
*
Heartbreak is you.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
this heartbreak is so lovely π
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Thank you, Rohit. π
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you’re welcome, Rupali π
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Really nice writing
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Thanks, Sumedha. π
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Beautiful π
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Thank you. π
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Hun, you make heartbreak sound beautiful π
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Aww, thank you sweetie. ^_^
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“Heartbreak is you”, excellently put that line. Your poem now I must admit I’m tired of appreciating you! Its like an inborn talent bursting out in perfection. Good luck baby! :*
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Thank you, bitch. :* I’m happy to see you took the time to come and comment here. π
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Neatly written
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Thank you, Josh. π
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i agree with ramya:)
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Thanks, Upen. π
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Luvz it!
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Thank you. π
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Your mix of simile and metaphor adds a lot of weight to the heaviness of heartbreak. It is one of those experiences that could make us write stanzas like this until the heart itself mends, which could be never in some cases. I can almost hear you read this, speeding up more and more as you near the end of the poem. Great writing, MBT!
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Metaphors are my favourite. They fascinate me. π
Thank you, Thomas. ^_^
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I love figurative language, too…You are welcome, Rupali π
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I told you before also that you write really well, and now again , I am here saying that you’ve written so wellβ€ π
Girl, write a damn book ! ββ‘
Bcz I’m tired of appreciating you :p hehehe… ^_^
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Haha, thank you so much, sweetie. β€
Hehe, I will write a book someday.
Are you on Facebook? π
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No need π
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You’re ignoring my question. π never mind. π
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Oh sorry, I didn’t read that full..
Haha
Yes I am on fb, insta and snapchat but nowadays kisi p b active nhi hu :p
Fb id deactivate krdi thi , I’ll be back on 28th March…
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hehe theek hai. Finish your exams first. π I figured.
Happens to me, too. Half message gayab ho jata hai, notifications mein nahi dikhta. π
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π exactly yaar… hahha..
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And I’ll wait for your book ^_^, seriously!
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If I ever write one, you’ll be one of the first people to know. π
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Aw, that’ll be an honour π
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You’re sweet. π
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You’re sweeter , and thnq β€ π
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β€ β€
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And I’ll wait for your book ^_^, seriously!
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Oh my! That’s so beautiful,all that heartbreak right there! π
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Thanks, Vi. π
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You’re very welcome! π
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^_^
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π
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Loved this!
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Thank you, Elsie. π
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The repeated last line is pathos….
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this is beautiful. well writen π
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Thank you so much. π
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Heartbreaking…
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*sad smile*
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Your poem says so much. Thanks for sharing
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Thank you. π
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Hey, you wrote this one soo well! Touched my heart! π
Btw, I’ve nominated you for the ‘One Lovely Blog Award’. Hope you’ll participate! Thanks! βΊβΊ
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Thank you so much, Chandni. β€
Thank you for the nomination, I'll go check it out on your blog. π
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Exactly…
Great to read !!
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Thank you. π
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My pleasure π
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I really wanted to express these phases but failing in doing so; this post have expressed every shades and given a shape to the idea..
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I’m glad it has. π
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This is heart touching β€ π
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Thank you. π
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Heartbreak sucks. This post does not,
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Thank you, Christian. π
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Great description of Heartbreak. Wonderful work my friend.
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Thank you, Andrew. π
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So true indeed! Woww π
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Thank you so much. π
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I just have run out of words to say how much I appreciate your talent. You are an amazing poet.
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Thank you so much. ^_^
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For once a HEARTBREAK doesn’t feel or sound painful!! Its always nice to see the brighter side of things. π
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Yes, it is. π
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So much depth in what you wrote. A great post.
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Thank you so much, Vidisha. π
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Heartbreak is unavoidable because the other person is involved π Cherish as long as you can but one day you have to bid farewell forever π
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Aye, I’m neither heartbroken, nor am I cherishing it. π Fiction hai yeh, as you very well know. π
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I know some stuff, yes π Well put then π
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Iska matlab kya hai, I don’t understand what you’re saying. π
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Kuch nahi meri maa π good luck for the exam π
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That’s a really good one. I should read them all. π Keep up the good work! π
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Thank you so much. π
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This is so beautiful! I am so glad that I found your blog because you are a completely AMAZING writer and I LOVE reading poetry π
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Hey, there. π Thank you so much! π Glad to have you here. ^_^
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For those of us who experienced heartbreak, you have expressed with haunting elegance that experience. For those possible souls out there who has somehow avoided it, they can now know what to expect should they live that long.
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I think everybody has experienced heartbreak in some form in their lives.
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You write such meaningful and true stuff! You are a beautiful writer!
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Thank you so much, Seth. π
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Beautifully written
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Thank you. π
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This was beautiful. I just published a similar little piece on heartbreak and regrowth, feel free to check it out! https://youthsgonewonky.com/2016/09/05/rotation/
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Thank you. π I’ll check it out!
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So so beautiful !! Xx
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Thank you. You have a beautiful name. β€
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Aw thankyou π
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β€
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