The odour
Of your departure
Lingers in the air
Your broken promises
Float in front
Of my eyes-
I reach out
And curl my fist
Around a few of them
And desperately shove it
Inside my mouth
But they dissolve
To nothingness
On my tongue
And I’m left
With the taste
Of your sweet lies.
*
Strength comes knocking
Once in a while
But the heartbreak
That always seems to
Linger just behind
The door,
Pushes it away-
I can hear the thud
As my strength
Hits the front porch
Muttering curses
Under its breath
For ever having tried.
*
I spend my days
Drinking loneliness
Like whiskey,
Singing haunted songs
To the sky,
Eating poetry for lunch-
For me, now,
Sunday mornings
Will always smell
Like your absence.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
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This is so painful but so beautiful! Congrats on getting it published π
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Thank you so much. π
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You’re so very welcome!
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I love the imagery
Simply beautiful
As always Sheldon
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Thank you, Sheldon. π
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Brilliant! Well done! ππ
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Thank you so much. π
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The pain has been rendered into words so beautifully that they don’t fail to touch.. Well done!
Many congratulations on getting it published π
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Thank you so much, Hargun. π
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This is elegant. Loving every bit of it.
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Thank you, sweetheart. π
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Oh, what a great write. Your opening was perfect. And I wouldn’t mind eating poetry for lunch as long as its your words.
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You’re too kind. Thank you very much. π
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I loved the flow and the way your metaphors kept forming pictures.
Very beautiful poem, MBT
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Thank you very much, Hiba. Call me Rupali. π
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Oh, finally! Know your name π
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Wow!So nice.Rupaliji.
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Thank you. π
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Welcome.
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Your poetry is just fantastic Rupali, I am always so amazed!! β€
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Thank you very much, Jennifer. β€
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Most welcome Rupali β€
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β€ :*
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Nice she grows, wanting to keep part of him with her but in the end, happy without him. Great transformation π
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Thank you, Mandi. π
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Beautiful imagery. I could taste her disappointment
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Thank you very much, Robyn. π
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Good one .. I read ur post after a long time
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Thank you. π
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Brilliant effort ! Loved it π I especially liked the metaphor in the second part. π
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Thank you so much, Akshitha. π
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You are welcome π
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I loved, loved, loved it! I read it a thousand times. This is such a beautiful piece. π
Also I was introduced to your blog by instagram. If you remember commenting on my account unwrecking. π
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Thank you so much, this means a lot to me. ^_^ I’m glad you came here. Its so nice to meet you. π
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The imagery is wonderful. Nicely written.
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Thank you so much! π
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Gosh! I feel like diving into the ocean of your words, and sink to the bottom, surrounded by the beauty that’s your poetry.
I know I suck.π But I am no Rupali. So, apologies. But, dude. That poem is so damn beautiful. How do you write such stuff? It’s really hard to fathom how someone can write such beautiful things with so much ease. Sigh
This is breathtakingly beautiful. π
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Can I tell you even better news? Its fiction. π Hehehe, sorry, I’m really awkward with compliments. *hides face* But, thank you so much. It really means a lot to me. ^_^
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I knew that already, believe it or not. π
And that’s an even better thing,I agree. Weaving something so beautiful just with your imagination is a big feat.π
And, same issue here. I can’t, for the life of me, take a compliment. I dunno when I will learn to just shut up and say thank you. Cuz when we try to tell people we aren’t all they are telling us we are, they shower us with even more compliments. And if,by mistake, we sound like we are in disbelief, they are on our asses like, you are fishing for compliments. So, I think I gotta learn to take a compliment.
Phew some rant.πΆ Ignore, Rups.*turns to go away*
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Wait, donut go woman. I GET YOU COMPLTELY. How to make people understand I’m not fishing for compliments.
They make me uncomfortable, I guess. Uffff. Maybe we’ll learn, someday. π Hopefully. π
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*turns back* Okay, if you insist.:P
Exactly. They don’t understand. At all. And I don’t know how to be less awkward, honestly. *makes a face*
Maybe we will. Maybe not, though.:P
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I’m am awkward person, hahahaha. π
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Hahahaha HI-5, then.:P
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This is going out to be one of my favorites… Love it! This is deep Rupali
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Thank you so much, love. β€
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