She broke a little each day, leaving the pieces with everyone she met
She broke so quietly, the pieces
Never making a sound, as they fell on the floor
Leaving parts of herself behind, trailing in her wake
Nobody even knew she was broken
But you knew, didn’t you?
The moment you looked into her eyes, so sad and haunted
You knew how beautifully broken she was
You knew, for you were broken too
Instead of gluing her pieces together, you seeped
Into her soul, until your jagged edges
Fit perfectly with hers, and together you became whole
She was beautifully broken, and so were you.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
Beautifully written. We’re all broken in some way, and if you find someone to fit with, that’s a wondrous thing. Like your poem.
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Thank you, Dave. ๐ Yes, we all are broken in some way. ๐
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What a sweet, romantic poem. Someone earlier in the comment thread mentioned that everyone is broken, but for myself I feel more like an old battery that has completely run down. My brother really was broken, though, when he fell from a tree as a boy. He had to wander about with his arm in plaster for ages. Em… I think your story about being broken is rather better than mine. ๐
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Hahaha. Thank you so much. ๐
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Very beautiful! It touched me!
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Thank you so much, Sofia. ๐
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It’s so beautiful to read attaching those broken pieces
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Thank you, Pavan. ๐
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My pleasure ๐
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beautiful
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Thank you. ๐
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Wow! This poem is so poignant and lovely. Love the title “Beautifully Broken”!
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Thank you so much, Shreya. ๐
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Touched again!
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Thank you, Linita. ๐
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Reblogged this on INK AND QUILL and commented:
Beautifully Broken, such a breathtaking piece, beautifully written. Such emotion in these words. โค๏ธ
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Thank you for sharing- this is so moving, really beautiful
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Thank you so much! ๐
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OMG! Too good! ๐
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Thank you, Vivek. ๐
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