She broke a little each day, leaving the pieces with everyone she met
She broke so quietly, the pieces
Never making a sound, as they fell on the floor
Leaving parts of herself behind, trailing in her wake
Nobody even knew she was broken
But you knew, didn’t you?
The moment you looked into her eyes, so sad and haunted
You knew how beautifully broken she was
You knew, for you were broken too
Instead of gluing her pieces together, you seeped
Into her soul, until your jagged edges
Fit perfectly with hers, and together you became whole
She was beautifully broken, and so were you.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
How beautifully you write!
I don’t have enough words to appreciate your clarity and sensitivity!
Happy Weekend 🙂
Love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
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Aww, thank you so much, Anand. Means a lot. ❤
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Welcome, Miss 🙂
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😀 😀 😀
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I agree, this moved me to tears. x
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Thank you. ❤
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Thanks Tiffany 🙂
Love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
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Awesome : )
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Thank you. 😀
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Welcome : )
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wow.. simply beautiful ❤
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Thank you so much. ❤
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My Pleasure! 😀
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Simple and beautiful, like always. Keep it up 🙂
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Thank you so much, Karthik. 🙂
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Perfect. 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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Awesome poem I really feel it 😉
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Thank you so much. 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂
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That’s my definition of soul mates. They fit in their brokenness and their flaws.
Really beautiful piece.
I believe in this with all my heart.
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Yes, I agree. 🙂 Thank you so much. 😀
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Wow! 💖
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Thanks, Rewa. 😀
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Reblogged this on The Lonely Author and commented:
Bravo <——- Me applauding. This is one of the best pieces I have read since I started blogging. From the opening line you captured me. When you arrived at "Leaving parts of herself behind, trailing in her wake" I was absolutely in love with this tattered lady. I wanted to be there to pick up every piece and glue them back together. By the end you had me standing up and cheering. What a masterpiece. I will reblog this post for everyone to see. Keep Writing Miss Book Thief.
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That is such an amazing compliment. I’m really honoured. Thank you so SO much. :’)
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You deserve it.
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*wipes away happy tears*
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I have never re-blogged anything before. But this poem enchanted me, I wanted it to be the first thing I re-blogged; I hope you don’t mind. You are truly special.
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I was feeling low, and this made my day. Thank you, again. (Haha, that’s the third time I’ve been thanking you.) YOU TOTALLY MADE MY DAY!!!!
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Good.
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Wonderfully written with an emotionally touching message. I enjoyed reading this immensely.
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Thank you so much. 😀
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Powerful and poignant poem. It captured me too. 🙂 Thanks, Brad
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Thank you, Brad. 🙂
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my pleasure. I look forward to reading more.
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That is so romantic 😭😭😭😭 I wanna cry 😭😭😭 How can anybody come up with something this beautiful??? ❤❤❤ Loved it to bits 😍😍😍
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Aww, you are too sweet. Thanks, babe. ❤ ❤
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This hit me like a wrecking ball. One of the best pieces I have read on WordPress. Beautifully broken, only a broken soul can mend a broken soul. So broken.
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Damn, you really love that song, don’t you? Hehehe. Thank you so much! 😀
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Hahaha, we all do, don’t we? ☺
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Hehehe, speak for yourself, human. xD
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Oops, I should? OK I give up, I do like that song. You got me
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Hahaha! So do I. But, what exactly about that song do you like? *curious expression*
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Well, interesting query you have, hmm, well the way she express the emotions and the lyrics to go with that…
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I love the lyrics, too!
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Speak for yourself human, don’t repeat me😝
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Stop being so mean. -_- I already told you in one of my previous posts that I like the song, remember? So,technically, you’re repeating me. *sticks tongue-out*
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*wondering* acha? Yup you did say that. But nowhere you said that you liked the lyrics too,,,,,…. Stop being so me *sticks tongue out*
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Areeyyy, meine bola tha, ki I like the lyrics. Hey! Sticking tongues out is my thing! Stop copying me. *huffs* Besides, I’m the younger one, so I’m entitled. xD
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Oh dear! Hahahah, OK I did copy that. Again undue influence. Mummy se bolunga
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Mein bhi mummy se bolungi. My mom will come and scold you. *sticks tongue out again*
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Be your own self human don’t repeat😝 . *sticking tongue out like a pro😛😛*
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Sticking tongue out mein bhi pro? Hahaha. Mein copy karungi, meri marzi. 😛
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OK baba, you’re miley Cyrus greatest fan, happy now☺. She’s the rakhi sawant of Hollywood
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Nahiiii. Mein Miley ki fan nahi hun. Sirf that song. 😛 You win, you win!
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I hate winning when someone i respect is involved, so I better lose.😊
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Aww, you respect me? Or.. Did you mean Miley? *narrowed eyes*
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Hahah.. Well, i ll give you a hint, it’s for someone who is beautifully broken & beautifully irrelevant, a wanna be air hostess who builds walls around her with shards of broken glass. *sigh*
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Okay, I don’t wanna be an air-hostess anymore! I thought I made that clear, hehehe.
Even though all of what I write is fiction, that seems to be a fitting description of me. *sighs louder* (Do we HAVE to make everything a competition? hehe)
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Competition is healthy…. And yes blogger/writer they write what they feel like, and we feel ourselves better than anybody else.
*sighs mutely*
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True that. Haha, anybody reading this would think we are crazy. 😛
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Think? Forget thinking, a straightforward Insane stamp will be levied on our head. 😋
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I know, right? Isn’t that awesome? *in an enthusiastic voice* 😀
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*in a philosophical voice* oh yes, awesome it is, awesomeness is a state of mind, when you feel it, you own yourself.
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Hahaha! We belong in an asylum. *insert that smiley where you laugh so hard you cry*
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And I thought we are from mars…. Thank god, I m not an alien…
*mouthing jokers iconic dialogue* Let’s put a smile on that face😀
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I love joker!!! And, mars? Nooo. I don’t think they have chocolate or cake there. 😛
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Wow, joker… He’s like my only inspiration. Wait…Chocolates on Mars? Even earth didn’t have them, we made them… So we can make them on Mars too…
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That.. Is a very good point. But, we do need the raw materials.
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Just like we hv Africa, mars would also be having its own version of Africa. Wait. Why are we talking big bang theory now ?
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Why did we jump to freakin’ Africa? 😛
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Of course the main source of chocolate raw material is Africa…😂😂 …. That explains it.
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Please tell me that wasn’t a racist joke. xD
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Oh no, seriously not…. Literally most of the chocolates seeds are imported from Africa… Didn’t know that ?
Ah and one more thing…. The labours who actually work over there are child labours….
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No, I didn’t know that. Oh, man. That’s sad. 😦
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Oh dear! don’t be, you did no wrong, if you don’t eat it somebody else will….. OK, no more Africa sentiments or else I ll start crying *sobbs*
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Hahaha, alright. No more Africa sentiments. 😛 You do realize we are entire conversations in the comments section? 😛
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Is it😮… Oh….. Century ban gai😂
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Hahaha. 😛
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Hey! You have a mail or something… So we won’t be bombarding the comment section.
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Facebook? Mail nahi use karti mein.
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Okay! Where can I find you on fb
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☺
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Let me just delete that link ka comment. xD
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Sure….😊
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true love does not worry about flaws…this is gorgeous
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Thank you so much. That is very much true. 🙂
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you are welcome!
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🙂
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Touching. And timely. More words escape me. But thank you for sharing yourself so eloquently!
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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so very lovely… 😉
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Thank you so much. I love your posts, you write so beautifully. ❤
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Thank you so much! 🙂 You write beautifully as well.. do ever stop! 🙂
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Thank you. ❤
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Oh geez… Made me a little teary this morning… Loved it!
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Thank you so much. 🙂 It’s night here, haha!
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Reblogged this on Impromptu Promptlings and commented:
I never cease to be amazed at the talent of the folks who write on Word Press. Although I believe a person must be whole in themselves before they can have a really healthy relationship with anyone else, the words of this poem hummed in my heart so deeply I had to reblog it.
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Thank you so much. 😀
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Wonderful. I love the way you write 🙂
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Thank you so much. ❤
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Oh my goodness. The vulnerability here is fantastic. I could feel each piece, as it shattered and fell away.
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Thank you, Steve. 🙂
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The Lonely Author Blog brought me here and I’m so thankful that he did … Your words really resonated with me. With a lot of people – I read the comments and liked most of them🙈😄
Thank you so much for sharing 💗
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Thank you so very much. 😀
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Your words are precious! What a pleasure to read!
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Thank you. 😀
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You’re very-very welcome!
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This is such a beautiful piece! I stopped breathing after the 4th line. Deep, joyful, sad, passionate and artfully projected. Thank you for a heart that speaks and a mind that let’s it talk.
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Thank you so very much. 😀
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It happens very rarely that something leaves me speechless. And your poem did it to me today. So thank you for that! You’re extremely talented, Miss Book Thief!
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Thank you, Uday. That’s an amazing compliment. 😀
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Reblogged this on Putting My Feet in the Dirt and commented:
Beautifully written!
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Thank you, Michelle. 😀
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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🙂
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That touches me so deeply and profoundly.
Thank you.
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I should be the one thanking you. 🙂
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Love you Girl for your poems ❤ and I have said this before I love your tagname 🙂
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Love you, too, Darsh. ❤ Thank you. 😀
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Kintsukuroi… Beautiful
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Thank you. 🙂
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broken pieces -the idea that evokes sad memories, you took them, piece them together into something so beautiful that it filled my heart with longings, no more ruing the fact that I’m broken, but the hope of finding one that fits into mine… beautiful composition… made my day… 🙂
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You will find one that fits into yours. 🙂 Thank you, Nitin. 😀 I’m glad it made your day. 🙂
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Yes.. It did.. Thank you… 🙂
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I think I should be the one thanking you. 🙂
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Hehe… So.. It will always be my pleasure 🙂
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*grins*
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I hope you’re going to have a poetry book out soon.
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Violet, I wish. *deep sigh*
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Found you through the lonely author and just wanted to say how much I admire your work.
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Thank you so much, Karen. ❤
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Reblogged this on Tiffany Belle Harper and commented:
Found this via my friend ‘Lonely Author’ one of the best pieces I’ve ever read. Glorious, keep writing.
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Thank you, Tiffany. (Love your name, by the way.) Thank you so much. ❤
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Left me speechless. It was great.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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🙂
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Awesome!
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Thank you. 😀
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Great piece love the idea
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Thanks, Sheldon. 🙂
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Wow, this is absolutely stunning! I feel the emotion of this piece as though I were that broken girl. Excellent. 🙂 I will definitely be reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing!–Lindsey
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Thank you so much, Lindsey. ❤
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I love your writings..
Heartfelt for sure
I too am a crazy book lover too..
Thanks for sharing 😊
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Thank you so much. ❤ And, hey there, crazy book lover. We should chat books. 😀
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You are welcome
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Love of God acts as a glue between the broken hearts to join them..
So nice words and matching title…
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Thank you, Akhila. 🙂
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So Nice,
She broke so quietly, the pieces
Never making a sound, as they fell on the floor
Leaving parts of herself behind, trailing in her wake……
Wow!!!!!!!!!!.
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Thank you so much. 😀
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Welcome.
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🙂
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:))
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So deep. This poem expresses the emotions that most of us find hard to express, and it also helps to realize that we’re not the only ones who are broken…And I really loved the part where the two broken jagged parts of two broken people connected together to make each other whole =] Very lovely ^_^
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Thank you very much, Mei. 😀
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Reblogged this on redroseonasnowybench.
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This was astoundingly beautiful
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Thank you so very much. 😀
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I love this, it reminds me of something I wrote: “You had the perfect person. Not a person who is perfect, but one who fills the spaces that you leave empty and loves the spaces that you fill.” The imagery of a soul in love is quite remarkable and I love your articulation of broken pieces being puzzle pieces. I believe our vulnerabilities are also our opportunities for connection.
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What you wrote is beautiful. 🙂 I agree. Thank you very much. 🙂
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Sometimes, we find comfort knowing that another one is broken too. May each be whole and stand tall!
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True. 🙂
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🙂
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I’m out of adjectives. I can’t even dream of writing this beautifully.
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Thanks, babe. :*
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Would you please continue to kill me with your words? I beg of you. You have turned me into a masochist, word mistress.
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Hahaha, thank you, O drama queen.
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Hey girl! I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Check it out! https://thehayleydiaries.wordpress.com/2015/11/04/the-versatile-blogger-award/
Xx Hayley
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Thanks, Hayley. :*
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* tear drops* i looooooove it. It’s so goog i’ll have to reblog it. *follows blog*
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Thank you, thank you. 😀
xx
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