Maybe the sun
Is in love
With the moon
And, every night
He hides behind
A cloak of darkness
Just to see her
Light up
The whole damn world.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
Maybe the sun
Is in love
With the moon
And, every night
He hides behind
A cloak of darkness
Just to see her
Light up
The whole damn world.
-The Girl Lost In The Bookstore
This reads well…
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Thank you. 🙂
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It was my pleasure to read what your beautiful mind created…
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Thank you so much. I love your haikus! 😀
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Thank you 🙂 We should collaborate one day soon. I’d love to write with you – some free verse, of course, unless you wanted to tackle some versed forms with me. We can connect via email (crupley50@gmail.com) or on FB (my gravatar).
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This is such an honour. I’d love that. 🙂
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I hardly know what you mean. The honor is mine. It is morning here, but I work nights, and must go to sleep now. Email me, and we will decide what we must write!
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I did, sent you a message on FB. 🙂 We can discuss whenever is convenient for you. 🙂
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I haven’t gotten the message yet. Not to worry. Email will work just fine. Maybe that message will surface sooner or later 🙂
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Check your spam folder, it might be there. I’ll email you anyway. 🙂
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I send you a message on FB. I’m not able to add you, though.
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I’ll check 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Axelle. 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank you, Nilesh. 🙂
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Oh, this is gorgeous. ❤
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Thank you, Annie. 🙄
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You’re very welcome, my dear 🙂
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😀
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Really good! 👍
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Thank you. 🙂
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fun and beguiling!
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Thank you. 🙂
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wow..this is really good
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Thanks, Shitij. 🙂
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😀
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Beautiful – I liked it very much. Hope your day is going well! 🙂
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Thank you so much. 🙂 It is, hope yours is going well too!
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This is the very best summary of all great love stories.
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Thanks, girl. 🙂
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Nice thought…sounds they play hide and seek 🙂
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Haha, well, they can’t meet, can they? Thank you. 🙂
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Beautiful ☺️
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Thanks, Adhi. 🙄
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😀
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Simply lovely.
🙂
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Thank you, Stacy. 🙂
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🙂 ❤
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And the sad thing is they can never be together because when they are both up, they are kept so far apart that they can only worship each other from afar… So sad. Great poem.
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That’s exactly what I wanted to convey. Thank you. 🙂
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This is gorgeous personification…and look at how the sun makes that moon glow!!
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Thank you, Thomas. 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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🙄
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hmm, I am not familiar with 🙄
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It’s a cute smiley. 😀
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Ah, thank you 🙂
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Nice, but it’s the sun that lights up the world 😛
But the concept is a nice one 🙂
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I know that. 😛 I just wanted to romanticize. Thank you. 🙂
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Your sweet words light up the whole damn world. Good work my friend.
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And your comments light up mine. Thank you. 🙂
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Smiling. Thanks
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🙂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you. 🙂
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You’re Welcome:)
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🙂
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Nice!
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Thank you. 🙂
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You’re welcome x
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xx
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How romantic ❤️ great post 😊
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Thank you. ❤
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Welcome
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😊
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❤
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^_^
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Very good. I once wrote a tale about the sun and moon being knights on a journey to protect Princess Gaia. Eventually they became planets and sun watches over earth during day while moon protects at night. Of course I was 13 or so when I wrote it for a school project =P
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Haha. But it sounds lovely. I’d love to read it. 😀
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Wow! Such a beautiful personification.. !
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Thank you. 😀
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Oh my God!!! *swoon*
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*sprinkles water on your face*
Hehehe, thank you, my dear friend. *bows*
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